Cheating partner
A couple have been happily together for a few of years but over the last three months suspicion occurs when the boy becomes very secretive. When he is purchasing coffees he leaves his mobile on the table and a text comes through. The girl can’t take it any longer and looks at the message to find it says ‘Last night was amazing! I can’t wait to see you later ;) Jay xxx’. Shocked by what the girl has read she deletes the message puts the phone back on the table and puts a fake smile on her face as the guy comes back over and hands her coffee over. After a while another text message comes through which he smiles and replies too. The guy begins to gather his stuff together saying he has to leave in which the girl asks why? He says it lads night out playing pool and having a couple of drinks at the rabbit and cabbage. The girl lets the guy go but later that evening in the flat she is waiting for him to leave so she can follow him as she does not trust him at all. Time passes and the girl thinks she must be paranoid and read the text wrong but then the guy leaves the flat walking the opposite way to where the pub he said he was going was. Walking behind at a distance she suddenly stops as he meets a girl in dim street lighting. After a short chat the guy starts making out with the girl and things get pretty heated. The girl is heartbroken and confused in what to do next, decides to film a bit as proof so when she confronts him he can’t deny it. She then tries to call him as she hopes deep down he’ll come to his senses and stop what he is doing. He looks at the phone ringing shows the mystery girl and laughs. Now filled with hate and revenge the girl heads home trying to decide what to do next. Should she confront him? Should she get the girl’s number of his phone and confront her? Should she show her anger and revenge by inviting another male to the flat for him to find? The girl is overwhelmed with emotions but which will control her and take over her body?
The curse of the tribal clan
A group of friends plan a weekend in some woods which are meant to have a curse of an ancient tribal clan to prove it is just a myth. One is a descendant of the clan and is very superstitious about the curse being true. The group meet at the edge of the woods and go down together to find a place to set up camp. After a few drinks by the campfire the group decide it would be fun to play a game. Man hunt is chosen and the group separate. The superstitious one becomes overwhelmed with paranoia and the alcohol and darkness is fuelling it more, to the extent that he begins to think the others are going to kill him. He blacks out...a news report is then played of 5 students have been found murdered and one has been left in a coma in the woods. Is this the curse of the tribal clan or did the superstitious one paranoia overcome him.
More will be up tomorrow!
Hey Emily! These both sound pretty good, I especially like the second one because I like creepy-scary stories haha.
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Hello :) Thank you I think creepy-scary stories are easier to write :)
ReplyDelete'The Rabbit and Cabbage' did take me awhile to think of as i didn't want to be like 'Wetherspoons' or 'The George' haha
Well i'm just typing some more up now! x
Hi emily, its great to see you putting up so many ideas. What I will say is they are all interesting STARTS to stories. Nothing in them, yet, suggests there is a complete story idea. They are like set-ups. Look at the ending, the bigger picture. Same with your ideas in the blog about love story. Think about combining the ideas or putting a twist on it... a complete love story set only on the bus journey... or the cheating partner idea set while the students go to the woods...
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